Night out. [Short story] Atmosphere, imagery,twist.
The Stores was amazing. Again. The fake I.D. worked just fine. You had to hold it away from the light. The sellotape and ink that took 4 hours to perfect were given a cursory glance by a steroidal side of beef in a black bomber jacket. He was too preoccupied staring at a scuffle down the hill and wishing he was there, to notice Jack didn't have much in common with the picture on the card. Inside was a car crash. Half of Jack's pals were drunk from the bus trip to town. His girlfriend spent the first half hour pulling and yanking her red dress to undo the puritanical efforts her mother had set it with. "Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!",seemed to be her default phrase. High pitched when sighting a friend in the crowd, grunted while dress-adjusting. It was already past midnight. Judging by the garish scenes unfolding in front of him, Jack knew the night had already been a roaring success. His friends danced, courted, necked shots and cavorted like only uninhibited ...